Re: how this poem is cool or something (Deep Fried Crime)

> i think that poetry is amazing. it can be naff, cheesy and profound all at once. this is such a case.

i was struck by certain images, and though the tone was repetitive, down-beat, and droning, the images pierced through those greasy lines.

references to eliot, poe emerson aside… if it was better crafted, i'd say it'd be more like a frost ballad.